Group 4 Pitch and Audience Feedback

• Audience feedback
• The main thing that had people talking about our pitch was that we were not specifically exposing the vampires as vampires well enough for the audience, this divided the classroom in whether they thought it would be effective or not
• However our way to overcome this problem is to explicitly explain that they are vampires through action or dialogue, for example the biting of someones neck or superior strength.
• We have also altered the costume due to our first filming, the vampire and human looked the same.
• Some commented on how the story of the opening sounded exciting, due to actions such as the chase as well as a fight.

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